Sales pitch
Topic:-- Financing pitch for a safety products to keep you safe from an earthquakes.
There are various types of products that are used for providing safety during an earthquake:-
- First aid kit: Keeping a first aid kit should be your utmost priority. It may include medicines, bandage strips, hand
- Water: You must keep enough supply of water as it is essential for your survival and is a basic need. And you will require it for drinking as well as sanitation. You must carry water supply for at least three days.
- Food: You must include non-perishable food in your emergency supply kit. Also, keep food items which are easy to prepare.
- Flashlight: As the power supply may get disrupted, thus it is advisable to keep a flashlight for your safety.
- sanitizer, band-aids, etc.
Highlights : Well written with appropriate use of points.
ReplyDeleteYour topic is clearly defined with your writing part.
Areas of improvement : Overall has nicely written but there are some punctuations mistakes (like comma, full stops, and so on....). But you can further clarify it. ✨✌
Highlights : There are mistakes in punctuations. There are mistakes in articles. Conclusion is miss there.
ReplyDeleteLowlight : You use good material for it. All are good.